This Silent Moon is a ballade with double refrain based on a traditional Zen story. Anyone familiar with the ballade format can tell you I’ve only mostly followed the rules.
I would be interested to hear your comments, especially if you’ve written a ballade with double refrain or know of good examples.
This Silent Moon
A monk met a thief on the road to White Thay
Who brandished a mace as he strode ‘cross the snow.
“Your purse and your coat, and you’ll live yet a day.
Bright gold I must have, though it prove my soul’s woe.”
Said the monk to the thief, “Pray, withhold your blow.
I’ll give you my garments, and with them this boon.
There shines Selene against the night’s indigo.
If I could, I would give you this silent moon.”